On Fallow Ground
Important moments in my childhood:
The baby pine given me after services
is fifteen years old and nearly as many feet high.
We left them unattended.
My sister's died.
I buried some seed
in the sandbox where,
daily, I terrorized ants.
It bloomed.
And the rock my father
taught me to grow,
one long and restroomless day,
became a mountain by next visit.
These, I suspect, are some of the reasons
the chips have fallen where they have
since the first observed dawn.

The baby pine given me after services
is fifteen years old and nearly as many feet high.
We left them unattended.
My sister's died.
I buried some seed
in the sandbox where,
daily, I terrorized ants.
It bloomed.
And the rock my father
taught me to grow,
one long and restroomless day,
became a mountain by next visit.
These, I suspect, are some of the reasons
the chips have fallen where they have
since the first observed dawn.



4 Comments:
Jamye and I have been sitting here considering "On Fallow Ground." Her thoughts are more intelligible than mine. Could it be that sometimes the chips know where to fall so that they'll bloom and grow whether or not attended to? The final stanza has us thinking! What are the 'reasons' meant here? I ended up somewhere where Jamye did as well, the reasons being the gravitational pull of life on the pines, seeds & rocks in our lives.
Thanks for sharing. Good stuff. Is there a rythmic pattern too subtle for me, or is it freeverse?
Over and out. Pierre
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did you write that? -- seems like a song with the chorus and stuff, is it/was it? pretty intense. P
Nope Mudflaps, wasn't me. I'm wondering who wrote it myself. It is pretty intense and I'd like to post it on the main page with author credit.
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