Monday, April 03, 2006

paint map moon - no face -
feeds my dissimilar taste
but this is nature.

painted sky - no sun -
clears up haze until you're done
but this is life.

1 Comments:

Blogger Abraxas Z said...

Almost. I wrote these years ago after reading something about haikus having to deal with some aspect of life and/or nature.

You could put the emphasis on "is," but I never do, always just reading them as any other haiku, without emphasis.

6:56 PM  

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